My draft for essay 4

How Effective Are Body Weight Exercise How Effective Are Body Weight Exercise? 

Strength training looks like this: People only train their weight. Strength training uses your weight to train you for endurance, endurance, and cardiovascular disease. This only applies to the body and gravity. Therefore, it is more suitable than strength training. It can happen anywhere and is now ideal during a pandemic. One of the strongest exercises is the highest belief that it is for people who are just starting to shape their shape. However, he pointed out that it was not just for beginners. If people need to prove how strong their strength training is, just look at the gymnasts (weight 1 pound), there are some of the strongest athletes in the world and all they do is dance. People may already be familiar with weight training such as pushing and pushing, but there are many techniques they can use to build muscle, strength, endurance, and head-to-head pendulum. However, since strength training does not require the use of special equipment, there may be a reputation for relaxing or less effective exercise, which the trainer says is certainly not the case. Keep pondering the misunderstandings of our three most common trainers about strength training and the truth about coaching techniques. He said that if people can easily make 30 arm curls, try to take on the challenge of making only 10-15 frequent changes like pushing in the fall. Watch these weight changes, they take your workouts to the next level. To make strength training more difficult, reduce the frequency of reps, adjust the angle, and change other variables, such as the number of reps or recovery time. Nothing is separate from resistance training. Of course, lifting increases the difficulty of certain muscle groups, but it has been suggested that weight training can increase the role of the body at the same time. No matter what people do during weight training, participation and activation is essential. Everyone needs commitment and constant work, so make sure people think about their whole body with each exercise.  

Exercise has a significant impact on health, appearance, and well-being. Being in good physical shape can ensure a better quality of life and prevent the development of many “non-communicable diseases”, such as cardiovascular disease or obesity. According to the concept of health-related exercise (HRF), exercise is one of the main factors influencing health. HRF emphasizes the importance of maintaining a maximum level of health in the following areas: physical fitness, musculoskeletal condition, ability, cardiovascular adaptation, and flexibility. Transformations involve the structure and composition of the body and, if abnormal, increase the risk of death and disease. The musculoskeletal system includes factors such as strength and endurance in the legs, arms and trunk and their elevated level allows the whole body to function normally. On the other hand, poor fit is a risk factor for falls and often leads to fractures. Posture and flexibility also play a significant role, as inadequate body control and less flexible luggage are associated with low back pain. In terms of health, cardiovascular disease is essential because its low levels increase the risk of heart disease and premature death. Health training, which can be in the form of endurance or strength training, is an effective way to influence all aspects of physical activity that are in the speed response model. To date, strength training has been associated with increased muscle mass through gymnastic exercises and it can also be in the form of strength training, i.e. movement. By using a person’s weight. This unpopular form of strength training has grown exponentially in recent years as it improves muscle strength and endurance, and it should be noted that this is cardio training. The advantage of this type of training is that it covers many muscle groups, which also helps to improve balance, pain, and flexibility. In addition, there is strength training for those who claim to limit their sports activities due to leisure and financial restrictions. These people can benefit from being able to do strength training at home, the time required is short (depending on the training method, the time is between 12 and 40 minutes) and no special equipment is available.  

  

 

 

  

   

My Peer review for RYUTO.

The thesis stated clearly in the writer introduction, and the subject meets the introduction. The evidences are credible. The writer focused on the mean point with different argument in each paragraph. At the beginning the writer explained how stressful is the effect of parental on their child, before the conclusion he described the effect of being stress.  The opposing arguments are sounding good and logical. If parents choose to support their child the phenomenal of depression will decrease. The writer used the text citation by adding the source name with quotation.

Photo Essay

I am looking forward to the photo essay which is due in coming weeks. The first consideration that I would be taking is not to get involved in any unethical activity and breach of academic policies. The photos I will incorporate in the essay would be taken permitted of or will be obtained from sources that provide free pictures for academic purposes. Those pictures with watermark will not be included in the essay. The pictures will be connected to each other and will be relevant to the text and argument made in the essay. The pictures will be captioned according to the text mentioned in the story or to create a connection between the picture and the argument.

My Draft of Essay 3

Are Breast Implants Making Women Sick

Breast implant is one of the most common surgeries that take place among cosmetic surgeries. It is assumed that breast implants can last a lifetime which is not the case in most instances. It is observed that most individuals who have undergone breast implant surgeries have become subject to some sort of medical complexities. According to the estimates of the US FDA, at least one in five women having cosmetic surgery for the first time have to undergo some sort of cosmetic complications and have to go for operation. This means that twenty per cent of the population undergoing breast implants for the first time has to go through subsequent operations within a span of ten years. Moreover the number exceeds with individuals whose first surgeries were considered necessary. The percentages of these individuals increase to about 40 to 70% (Pavlov-Dolijanovic and Nada 37). The complications are so intense that almost 4500 women have to remove their implants due to the constant trouble they have been facing (Barbosa et al. 44). Upon considering these numbers to be over stated to reduce people’s attention towards implants even then the real issue lies in proving implants as the direct cause of medical ailments.

Many physicians and the US government continue to argue that approved devices can be safely placed because the ban on some transplants was lifted more than a decade ago. As research support grows, North American patients say health risks persist. The United States is just beginning to understand and respond to the problems that transplants can cause. This fact shows that our healthcare system is imperfect withholding evidence can ignore patients’ complaints after decades of serious medical thinking. When it comes to women’s health, people tend to be untested and prone to prejudice or lack of resources (Rohrich et al. 27). Such termination may mean that many issues have been resolved or not discussed at all. Many women say that the experience of transplantation began with incorrect information about transplant surgery or direct pressure from doctors.

The US Department of Health and the FDA has demanded that manufacturers withdraw their silicone products from the market on hold. This is an industry strike that is already in difficulty and there are growing indications of the risk of transplants. In 2019, Dow Corning’s own research showed that silica gel has a significant effect on the immune system. Other reports suggest that this substance appears to cause the body to attack its own proteins. The people who received the transplant sued the group, and in 2017 they reached an agreement with three manufacturers for 3.7 billion dollars(Pavlov-Dolijanovic and Nada 37). It contains over 480,000 potential claims. Women experience mysterious symptoms such as fatigue, depression, anxiety, and chest pain, chills, rash and hair loss. They suspected the cause her breast transplant. Some women who are determined to get rid of these vague but bad symptoms decide to remove the implants to solve their problems.

Many of these symptoms can be caused by many other conditions, such as menopause, thyroid disease and autoimmune disease. Thus, scientists could not draw a clear line between transplantation and disease. But they are looking for solutions and hope that one day they can provide answers to women who are affected as soon as possible. This cannot be denied that women experience these symptoms. This is simply the cause of the problem and how people treat it. Most women who choose breastfeeding make up about 80% of the decision. For cosmetic reasons, an additional 20% of breast implants are made in women who have undergone mastectomy to treat or prevent breast cancer (Watad et al. 19). There are several types of implants, some filled with silicone and others filled with saline. There are also implants with a smooth outer layer and some implants with a textured outer layer. However, studies soon emerged that ruled out a link between transplantation and connective tissue, neurological or autoimmune diseases.

The American School of Rheumatism pointed out that evidence should not be used to prove this connection in court or in the FDA. Over time, the issue gradually disappeared from people’s eyes. In 2018, two silicon plants imported implant manufacturers for resale in the United States, and the majority (about 80%) of women who opted for breast implants made the decision. Doctor. For cosmetic reasons, there is a 20% breast implant chance from women who have been breastfeeding or prevent breast cancer (Steve et al. 29). There are several types of implants some are filled with silicone, resin, others with saline, smooth and others with a silent shell. Although research on breastfeeding diseases is conclusive, there is some literature documenting the risks associated with breast implants, including possible surgical complications (such as infection) and implants. In addition, the manufacturer has deliberately withdrawn some of the textured implants that were often used in breast surgery in the summer of the 20th century. Three week later, they were linked to a rare non-Hodgkin’s lymphoma (known as anaplastic large cell lymphoma ALCL), which affects the body’s immune cells, the FDA reported abcd.

Most women with this condition accumulate water around the implant, which can cause inflammation in the breast. If successful treatment is achieved, surgery is usually only required. The implant is removed surgically and a tissue capsule is formed around it. It’s mostly medical. She says a small percentage of women still need additional chemotherapy or radiation. However, when doctors no longer use these textured implants, some women may use them and it is advisable to monitor for changes in the breasts. If something goes wrong there is no need to remove the implant. Women who are considering breast-feeding, the FDA recommends that they need to talk to the doctor about the potential risks (Steve et al. 29). This risk may involve the need for additional action. General symptoms, commonly known as breast-feeding. The development of scar tissue can compress the implant and cause chest pain. Breast implantation or deflation and infection are the main diseases caused by breastfeeding.

The longer the implant remain inside the body, the greater the risk of complications. In carefully selected patients, transplants can significantly improve the quality of life. Implants transplant doctors can improve the body’s appearance and quality of life for breast cancer survivors and also help women treat them. Researchers are always looking for solutions to breastfeeding diseases. Scientists have not been able to determine if and how transplantation causes this symptom in women (Watad et al. 19). Some diseases can be caused by other undiagnosed diseases, such as autoimmune diseases. But it is also possible that a small proportion of women are at risk for common diseases associated with transplantation. Some women report that their symptoms disappear after the transplant is removed. However, it is difficult to determine whether this is the reason for the change.

The subconscious could think that the symptoms have improved. Further information on breastfeeding diseases is expected in the coming years. It can be said that the causes and diseases behind breast implant cannot be found, but progress is being made regarding ways to find out more. Researchers are working with the patient’s stakeholders to design research that clarifies between breast augmentation and female symptoms. Hopefully, this study will help researchers answer questions and find answers (Rohrich et al. 27). It is important to understand that although the symptoms of breastfeeding disease may be related to the presence of the implant, it does not prove that the implant is causing the problem. Certified beauticians and American plastic surgeons focus on helping women understand the risks and benefits of breast implants. Looking to the future, it is hoped that the sources are unable to achieve more. It seems that women with certain risk factors are not suitable for transplantation, but other women are better off.

 

 

 

 

 

 

References

Barbosa, Monica R., Una E. Makris, and Ishak A. Mansi. “Association of breast implants with nonspecific symptoms, connective tissue diseases, and allergic reactions: a retrospective cohort analysis.” Plastic and Reconstructive Surgery 147.1 (2021): 42e-49e.

Pavlov-Dolijanovic, Slavica, and Nada Vujasinovic Stupar. “Women with silicone breast implants and autoimmune inflammatory syndrome induced by adjuvants: description of three patients and a critical review of the literature.” Rheumatology international 37.8 (2017): 1405-1411.

Rohrich, Rod J., Jordan Kaplan, and Erez Dayan. “Silicone implant illness: science versus myth?.” Plastic and reconstructive surgery 144.1 (2019): 98-109.

Steve, Anna K., et al. ““You Helped Create This, Help Me Now”: A Qualitative Analysis of Patients’ Concerns about Breast Implants and a Proposed Strategy for Moving Forward.” Plastic and Reconstructive Surgery 147.1 (2021): 16e-24e.

Watad, Abdulla, et al. “Silicone breast implants and the risk of autoimmune/rheumatic disorders: a real-world analysis.” International Journal of Epidemiology 47.6 (2018): 1846-1854.

 

My final draft for essay 2.

Should Teens Be Allowed To Have Plastic Surgery Without Parents Approval?

Plastic surgeries have become a fashion in the modern age where individuals are considering it a cure. It is an operation that can be used to cure the skin and appearance of an individual. Plastic surgeries are helpful in making the appearance of an individual better. However, it has many negative effects that the young generation ignores. These negative effects include loss of blood, hematoma, and infections. Nerve damage is also a major issue that cannot be neglected as a consequence of plastic surgery.

For teenagers willing to involve themselves in cosmetic surgery, it is important that they are aware of the consequences that could be caused. There is no use in making changes in a healthy body. It does not matter how small the changes need to be made or how small the operation it might take. It is important to have a healthy body rather than having an attractive one. There is a risk involved with cosmetic surgery, which can lead to a permanent health issue. In case something goes wrong, the patient has to go through permanent damage. The risks that are involved are critical and can cause an individual to become handicapped. For instance, the potential risk factors involved with cosmetic surgery include chronic pain, prolonged or delayed healing, allergic reactions, heavy lung problems, blindness, etc. It is not a pain-free operation; therefore, getting involved in an operation that has huge potential risks and injuries is not a wise decision to make.

Some cosmetic surgeries have resulted in failure and often proceed to death. For instance, the death of a mother of three children Lorraine Batt took place when she went for her belly surgery (Rohrich, Min-Jeong 38). These events are a warning that society needs to be vigilant, especially the young teens who do not take approval from their parents before getting into such surgeries. The teenagers do not take the long-term consequences into account and are willing to take risks considering them to be occurring in negligible cases. Such surgeries make teenagers look young for a small period, and after some time, wrinkles come back, wasting money and risk. Therefore the cosmetic surgery is not a natural process and can lead to removing implants in the later stages of life.

It is also argued that changing the body from its natural state is not morally right. Everyone is unique, and it is not right to reshape or design your body looking up to someone else. It is said that the inner self is a representation of the outer self. Therefore it is important that the inner self controls the outer appearance rather than artificial looks. For instance, Michael Jackson took cosmetic surgeries, and that resulted in strange effects on his body (Neuhaus et al. 249). A lacking personality results in lacking appearance, and cosmetic surgery does not cause any difference in the personality. Therefore the negative outcomes of cosmetic surgery are much more than the benefits in their appearances. It is advisable for teenagers not to carry out cosmetic surgeries and get stuck with lifelong impairments.

 

 

 

 

References

Rohrich, Rod J., and Min-Jeong Cho. “When is teenage plastic surgery versus cosmetic surgery okay? Reality versus hype: A systematic review.” Plastic and reconstructive surgery 142.3 (2018): 293e-302e.

Neuhaus, Carolyn P., Arielle R. Nagler, and Seth J. Orlow. “Teens, acne, and oral contraceptive pills: the need for greater clarity on when teens can consent.” JAMA dermatology 153.4 (2017): 249-250.

My Final Draft

Should Teens Be Allowed To Have Plastic Surgery Without Parents Approval?

Plastic surgeries have become a fashion in the modern age where individuals are considering it a cure. It is an operation that can be used to cure the skin and appearance of an individual. Plastic surgeries are helpful in making the appearance of an individual better. However, it has many negative effects that the young generation ignores. These negative effects include loss of blood, hematoma, and infections. Nerve damage is also a major issue that cannot be neglected as a consequence of plastic surgery.

For teenagers willing to involve themselves in cosmetic surgery, it is important that they are aware of the consequences that could be caused. There is no use in making changes in a healthy body. It does not matter how small the changes need to be made or how small the operation it might take. It is important to have a healthy body rather than having an attractive one. There is a risk involved with cosmetic surgery, which can lead to a permanent health issue. In case something goes wrong, the patient has to go through permanent damage. The risks that are involved are critical and can cause an individual to become handicapped. For instance, the potential risk factors involved with cosmetic surgery include chronic pain, prolonged or delayed healing, allergic reactions, heavy lung problems, blindness, etc. It is not a pain-free operation; therefore, getting involved in an operation that has huge potential risks and injuries is not a wise decision to make.

Some cosmetic surgeries have resulted in failure and often proceed to death. For instance, the death of a mother of three children Lorraine Batt took place when she went for her belly surgery (Roerich, Min-Jong 38). These events are a warning that society needs to be vigilant, especially the young teens who do not take approval from their parents before getting into such surgeries. The teenagers do not take the long-term consequences into account and are willing to take risks considering them to be occurring in negligible cases. Such surgeries make teenagers look young for a small period, and after some time, wrinkles come back, wasting money and risk. Therefore the cosmetic surgery is not a natural process and can lead to removing implants in the later stages of life.

It is also argued that changing the body from its natural state is not morally right. Everyone is unique, and it is not right to reshape or design your body looking up to someone else. It is said that the inner self is a representation of the outer self. Therefore it is important that the inner self controls the outer appearance rather than artificial looks. For instance, Michael Jackson took cosmetic surgeries, and that resulted in strange effects on his body (Neuhaus et al. 249). A lacking personality results in lacking appearance, and cosmetic surgery does not cause any difference in the personality. Therefore the negative outcomes of cosmetic surgery are much more than the benefits in their appearances. It is advisable for teenagers not to carry out cosmetic surgeries and get stuck with lifelong impairments.

 

 

 

 

Reference

Roerich, Rod J., and Min-Jong Cho. “When is teenage plastic surgery versus cosmetic surgery okay? Reality versus hype: A systematic review.” Plastic and reconstructive surgery 142.3 (2018): 293e-302e.

Neuhaus, Carolyn P., Arielle R. Angler, and Seth J. Orlop. “Teens, acne, and oral contraceptive pills: the need for greater clarity on when teens can consent.” JAMA dermatology 153.4 (2017): 249-250.

week 8

The research questions that I have chosen are: 

  • Is homework harmful or helpful? 
  • Do curfews keep teens out of trouble? 

I think that these research questions need to be addressed to society in general so that the pros and cons of these topics could be discussed. I believe that it is better to involve students in useful activities rather than making efforts that do not prove beneficial. I think it would be better for students to spend their time learning skills rather than wasting time on homework. 

I think that Homework are necessary to practice certain subjects, however most of the time they are useless and restrict the time of students. I believe that students can learn a lot at that time rather than doing the same things they have been doing at school. I think that the 7 hours of day students spend at schools are enough for academics and they should not do the same things and sit in front of the same books at home.  

I believe that curfews are helpful in keeping teens away from activities that can cause trouble for them. However, it can have a negative impact on the individuals as they are caught in a setting and can have mal thoughts. Therefore, curfews can be implemented, however there needs to be a task given to the teens so that they could work on themselves or their skills rather than getting involved in some destructive thoughts.